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BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lildrew on Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:10 am

i hope you'll like it...thanks to Jen for the corrections..

[chapter 1]

Sitting on a marble bench, I was staring at the sea right in front of me. Even though it was 7 PM on June 13th, the air was hotter than ever.

I have been in Southern Italy for over a year now and it has been the most beautiful period in my life.

Oh, what an idiot! I forgot to introduce myself... my name's Simon F... no, wait... I think my first name's all you need to know for now, you'll understand why later...

Anyway... I was sitting on this bench when suddenly somebody came along calling my name out loud: "Simo! Simo! Simon, where have you been? I've been looking for you everywhere. Tried to call you but your phone was out of range. What are you doing here?" It was a friend of mine, whose name's Henry but I started calling him Jared (cause he's the perfect copy of Jared Leto, just a bit younger and skinnier).

"Whoa whoa... One question at a time, kiddo! I've been here all the time and I just wanted to be on my own for a while. Had to think about something. I turned my cellphone off cause I didn't want anyone to bother me. I'm sorry I made you worry..."

"Is there anything wrong?"
"Well... I think you know what's wrong..."
"Still missing him, huh?"
"Yeah... Maybe... And maybe I should go away from here... Just for a little bit... I need to go back home... Need to go back to LA..."
"No...wait...wait...wait...back to LA?"
"Yes. I need to stay with my family... Just for a while..."
"But, Simo... You can't just go away because one of your best friends has left to go up north for a couple of months...c'mon!"
"Try me, buddy! And I've already made up my mind... There's nothing anybody can do about it, and anyway it won't be for long. Just a couple of weeks, maybe a month... I'll be back..."

At that point in the conversation he was looking at me with a face that speaks for itself... I knew it was a stupid thing I was about to do, but I needed to get away from this place before the whole situation could make me crazy...

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lilstargrl2009 on Tue Jun 16, 2009 7:35 pm

wow simo nice story, so what's the story about u and drew meeting each other lol..sound awsome if it was really true..but i like it a lil confussed at the beginning but it's okay..

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lildrew on Wed Jun 17, 2009 3:37 am

:D you'll see....

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lilstargrl2009 on Wed Jun 17, 2009 8:42 am

oh really :wink: cant wait to hear..lol :P

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby Chrissy.W.x on Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:51 am

Nice stoy so far, Simo... Hope you continue with it.

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lildrew on Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:00 am

2nd chapter's about to been posted!!!

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby Loor on Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:36 am

Nice job so far! I'm looking forward to reading more!

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lildrew on Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:27 am

and here we go with....

[chapter 2]

I walked away from him, but he followed me until he was walking right next to me. "You need to give it time and there's no need to grieve. You didn't lose anything! Nothing has changed. Come on!"
"Okay," I answered, "two weeks. If nothing changes, I'm back in the USA."
"It's a deal!" he said as we shook hands.
We went back to my car, a black Spider Cabrio that Henry and some other friends of mine call "The Black Widow," and Henry said, "whoa... With this background your car is great! Can I take a picture of it?"
"Oh, yeah, knock yourself out!" After that, we drove back to my house.
While we were on the road, Henry's phone started ringing. "Oh, can you stop at the hotel? It's my brother. He has to give me something for my dad. I'll be right back!"
"Of course!" I said, and I parked my car next to the hotel's entrance.
"On a second thought, why don't you come with me? We can have a coffee..."
"I don't know if..."
"Come on... As if anyone's gonna complain!" he said and I remembered how stubborn he was..
We entered the hotel, went to his brother and he gave him a little wooden box. "There you go... My friend just brought it to me"
"What's that?" I asked.
"Well... It is for you... Remember the little trip to San Marino? That shop?"
"Oh, my... Don't tell me it's the..."
"...athame! Right! I knew you wanted it and since I didn't give you a birthday present. So what do you think?"
"Oh my... I am speechless! Thanks! It's great! Thank you so much!"
"Well, you really deserved it, buddy! Now, come on, it's time to go back home! There's the city fair tonight, remember?"
"Whoa! Right, the city fair! I have completely forgotten! Let's go!"
As we were on our way out of the hotel, the valet asked me, "Sorry, Sir, is that black spider yours?" But I was in such a hurry that I just said, "Yeah, I'll move it immediately, we're leaving!"
"Sir! Sir! It's not what I meant" he started to say, but when he heard a "What the *?" he realized I just noticed myself.
The whole left side of the car had been completely ruined with a nail or something sharp. "My car! Oh, my God! My car! Who did this to me?" I started to scream and Henry said, "I guess you don't have to wait so much for an answer. Our little vandal lost his wallet right next to the car's tire, maybe he's got an ID card in there." I looked at the wallet and gasped.
"What? What's wrong?"
"Well, I am afraid I don't need to open it to know who it belongs to..."
"What d'you mean?"
"I know the owner of this wallet."
"How can you be sure?"
"Well, I gave it to him myself: it's my neighbour's son!"


thanks again to Jen for corrections!!!

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby Chrissy.W.x on Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:02 am

Nice chapter... And what an evil kid...*wink*

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby Kirianna Ledräen on Thu Jul 09, 2009 5:26 pm

Your welcome, Sweetie. :wink: It is a nice chapter... And like Chrissy said, that kid is evil! lol

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lildrew on Fri Jul 10, 2009 4:10 am

and it's just the beginning...you'll see!!!

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lildrew on Fri Jul 17, 2009 6:55 am

I had an idea...will update my fan fiction on a website and post the link to the chapters, so the topic wont be huge...

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby lilstargrl2009 on Sat Jul 18, 2009 4:46 am

nice story so far simo, i love it can wait to hear chapter 3 lol..post it up.

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Re: BroS [my fanfiction]

Postby Loor on Sat Jul 18, 2009 9:28 am

Nice update! If only I could get my hands on that kid..

Updating on another website is a good idea, it's also easier for us to keep track of updates I think.
The site I use for my stories (quizilla) is okay, but you could of course also use fanfiction.net.

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